Monday, 27 March 2017

Skateboarding

Today we had no skateboarding because it was cancelled and we were playing line basketball and  I could feel my sweet dripping down my face and we took turn and no one hogged the ball they were playing well and I could here my classroom cheering and we were all trying our best and we were bursting in sweet and some people were bushed in line and humble winner gracious losers and they weren't gracious losers and at the end we all of use were slapping hands and I was a little sleepy.

Sunday, 26 March 2017

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Today we had no skateboarding because it was cancelled and we were playing line basketball and I could feel my sweat dripping down on my face and we took turn and no one hogged the ball they were playing well and I could here my class room cheering and we were all trying our best and we were bursting in sweat and some people were bushed in line and humble winner gracious losers and they weren't gracious losers and at the end of all of use were slapping hands and I was a little sleepy.


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Tuesday, 21 March 2017

WALT summarise the main ideas of a text


lopi AMETI summaries

WALT summarise the main ideas in a text

I read the text called …..


Here is the URL for this text..


https://www.neighbourly.co.nz/public/auckland/mount-wellington/message/19951412

It was published on 20 days ago


Find and summarise 3 main ideas the text talked about.

This text talked about…
  • Stage 2A of AMETI is designed to replace the Panmure Roundabout with a signalised intersection, replace two of Lagoon Drive's four lanes with a 24-hour two-lane busway, and add a new parallel bridge over the Tamaki River.
  • The new intersection will severely restrict traffic movements out of Jellicoe Road and potentially force more traffic into the Panmure Town Centre. It will also give full priority of movement to buses to and from the east of the Tamaki River over local traffic in Panmure, and also see the transfer of a large part of Panmure's existing bus services to the new Lagoon Drive Busway.
  • Under the proposal, no vehicles from Jellicoe Road will be able to access Lagoon Drive, Ireland Road or the Ellerslie-Panmure Highway. Vehicles will be forced to find other routes - mainly by forcing their way through the Panmure Shopping Centre!


Because they are blocking jellicoe road the car has to go through queens road and cause

triffinc

lopi AMETI summaries

WALT summarise the main ideas in a text

I read the text called Busway for east Auckland a step closer


Here is the URL for this texthttp://ourauckland.aucklandcouncil.govt.nz/articles/news/2016/04/busway-for-east-auckland-a-step-closer/


It was published on  7 April 2016


Find and summarise 3 main ideas the text talked about.

This text talked about…

  • Fasta bus that come on time
  • There will be lans just for cars and buses
  • There will be separate lanes bikes and bus  and cars


Reflection -

It will be fasta for it to be separate

lopi AMETI summaries

WALT summarise the main ideas in a text

I read the text called panmure overview

Here is the URL for this text
https://at.govt.nz/projects-roadworks/ameti/panmure/


It was published on it doesn't say


Find and summarise 3 main ideas the text talked about.

This text talked about…
  • They fixed the panmure train station
  • They are making another bridge
  • There making a foot bridge


They are try to make people ride bikes