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Friday 27 July 2018

writing

K:


Intro:
When Paula started Fortnite, he jumped off the blue flying bus. He sniped 5 people as he walked towards the Tilted Towers. He stayed there for a while, and he left and walked towards Loot Lake. A big circle appeared in the sky and he knew he had one minute to get into the middle of the circle. He sprinted and got there just in time. There were 16 people left and then he started sniping people, and he got 12 kills.

Paula kept running looking for materials and weapons to help him.
L : He went into the house and he found a treasure chest and turned around. The treasure chest was empty. He heard somebody outside and he knew he was trapped.
P: He looked around and he  saw a gun and he went to go get it. “I need to kill the others!” he thought to himself. He smashed the table so he could build a little house to hide in. He went inside the house and stayed there to rest.


Paula kept running searching for more people to kill. When he went outside he heard whistling then he looked around then that’s when he saw a rocket.
L: He hid in the house and all of a sudden everything was black. The rocket had found him.  
P: He ran away and kept running. He outran the rocket and survived.


As he was running, he saw a gun hiding behind a bush cause somebody got killed. He walked over to pick it up and it was a…
Rifle
AR


Feeling tired, he rested while hiding behind a tree. All of a sudden he saw...
L: only one person left and then i spotted him but then he snippered me.
P:I saw the last person breaking the houses down so I got the minigunImage result for orange justice gif and killed him, so I got victory Royal so I did the orange justice.

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questions from my story -


  1. What’s his friends name?
  2. Why is chapter 6 called monkey business?
  3. Where is the monkey forest?
  4. Where was the stone found?
  5. Where did grandad work?
  6. What does rising sun mean?
  7. Where was the fish market?
  8. Who is the main character?
  9. Who lived in Japan?
  10. What was grandma’s story about?

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