Friday, 29 June 2018


today we been doing music and the teacher told us a sit and we played a piano and we played twinkle twinkle little star and this old man and he told us how to play it on the piano so we can learn learn it off by heart   

car crash

Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Car crash
2 sentences
Lopi was driving his car to work but then his car fliped over.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
Lopi was in the car his car got fliped over the driver behide him called the ambilenc and the fire finghter the guy that called the ambilec he was going around the car then the ambilanc came and stoped the traffic then they smashed the window lopi had blood all over his face because the class the fire fighter’s took the lopi’s belt off the they tryed to pull lopi out. Lopi was pulled  out then he got put in the ambilanc.
5-10 sentences
There family was terrifide they rushed to the hospitill they came to the hospitil they looked at him and he had a broken neck and brocken arm the arms were both brocken and sprang anckel
5-10 sentences
Lopi was in the in the
Less than 5 sentences


Start here: there is a man and his swing on the rop and he is a the water fall and he is way up in the air but he is not scared he is tough he is taking a swim well jumping off the rope and he is close to the rocks  and he it looks like he is about land in the rocks

put a ring around it

no escape

Finding descriptive language exaple

Thursday, 28 June 2018

twinkle twinkle tar colours


Once upon a time in a dark forest, there was a young princess who was lost.

Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town
There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye.

One sunny day ther was and a hadsome man his name was max he was  Enormously rich

He was the richst guy in the land he would give money to the poor there was some bad guys from the land they would steal stuff they would all ways take stuff and runaway but then max the hadesome man he stoped them from steeling.

sothern by the southern cross

postcards in space

Friday, 22 June 2018

v2 rockets

                            V2 rockets
what are V2 rockets made of ?
Eyewitness accounts describe prisoners being hanged from cranes above the rockets assembly lines. Despite his complicity in the conditions at Mittelwerk, the engineer who designed the v2, Wernher von Braun, came to be feted as a hero of the space age.

Who invented v2 rockets ?
1944 was a German and, later, American aerospace engineer and space architect. He was the leading figure in the development of rocket technology in germany and the father of rocket technology and space science in the united states and the person who invented was Wernher von Braun.

When did v2 rockets attacks begin ?
Launched from mobile units, each V2 rocket was 14 `metres 46ft high and carried a ton 900 kg of explosives. The first attack on London, on 8 september 1944 gouged a crater 10m 32ft across, killed three people and injured 22 people.    

How fast v2 rockets fly?

The speed of the V-2 rocket is 5,760km per hour.  

Thursday, 21 June 2018

Room 7 co-constructed narrative

Food is inside
Playing with matches
FireplaceTitle: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing

House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Put the fire out with water hosesImage result for fire house
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.

Fire in the house
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Friday, 15 June 2018


This girl has orange hair she a freng and plats her hair is in the air. Shes at the beach with a monkey the monkey has yellow fer and on the girls Shoulders. The girl has big teeth in the front and its white. She’s wearing yellow and white t shirt. Her eyes look like it got punched in the eyes by a boy.  


chane link


The columbia Disaster
The columbia disaster started when the space sotol talke of there was A whlo in the wing because same thing hit there rocket
Then they talked in to space and then on the way back to earth the
Rocket exported and they did not saved from the crash but gorn tack

The big captain decide that they shouldn't yous the sky camera to see what's wrong


long summer and long winter

the zeelon

t week we did reading we were drawing a line but in a different it was called zeelon i tried to draw a devil spider but then it looked pretty
ugly but then we had to do three zeelons then i drawed the last one oo the top

the boy zeelon

once there was a boy lopi he was a zeelon he went to the zoo and he saw three humans and he was taking a video of them they were doing trick like juggling and swing on bars on the top of the sealing heaps of people were there they were amazed by the three humans there was a girl that could fly a plan she took flying lesson she was the star of the and i liked the part when two boys was doing a dance and it looked there was a move called the back flip and the front flip and i liked it when the girl flyed in the air then the show was finished.

Tuesday, 12 June 2018

Friday, 8 June 2018

bouncy castle

Yesterday we went on this bouncy castle we got a bounce castle becuse of this boy called milan he got becuse he did the weet bex tryantheon and he won that’s how we got the bouncey castle and we did one class by one then we when we got there we had to take off our shoes and most of the class did’t like it then we had to line then we got to go on it

phase of the moon

Tuesday, 5 June 2018