Thursday, 28 June 2018

car crash

Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.



Title:
Car crash
Intro
2 sentences
Lopi was driving his car to work but then his car fliped over.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
Lopi was in the car his car got fliped over the driver behide him called the ambilenc and the fire finghter the guy that called the ambilec he was going around the car then the ambilanc came and stoped the traffic then they smashed the window lopi had blood all over his face because the class the fire fighter’s took the lopi’s belt off the they tryed to pull lopi out. Lopi was pulled  out then he got put in the ambilanc.
Problem
5-10 sentences
There family was terrifide they rushed to the hospitill they came to the hospitil they looked at him and he had a broken neck and brocken arm the arms were both brocken and sprang anckel
Solution
5-10 sentences
Lopi was in the in the
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences


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