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Freestyle writing

WALT:Freestyle writing an image

Today my teacher was miss komor because my teacher went to a sports event my teacher asked us to write a story about a picture.this is what i wrote.tell me what you think in the comments below.

The wind rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain at the greatest speed. for most children this will be an exhilarated evan terrifying experience but for lucy it was just ordinary. journey to school

She lives in the mountains with the bears. when she got to school everyone will bully her do so she back up to the mountains and never came back???????.

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