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Monday 27 March 2017
WALT mark our writing against a rubric
Today we had no skateboarding because it was cancelled and we were playing line basketball and I could feel my sweat dripping down on my face and we took turn and no one hogged the ball they were playing well and I could here my class room cheering and we were all trying our best and we were bursting in sweat and some people were bushed in line and humble winner gracious losers and they weren't gracious losers and at the end of all of use were slapping hands and I was a little sleepy.
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This is a great story Lopi.
ReplyDeleteYou need to remember
- leave spaces for paragraphs
- use full stops and capital letters to show where your sentences end (you are not allowed to say 'and then').
- say how you felt about what happened