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Tuesday 16 June 2020

PERSUASIVE WRITING

TOPIC = Should we be allowed to eat Bubble Gum in School.


Introduction : In Schools Bubblegum is one of the most strict rules.

Schools say bubble gum is not good for children because they get distracted. But today I am going to convince you that it is good for you.


Statement 1: Bubble gum is very good for you because it can help relieve stress . Bubble gum can be very useful if you are in a big test. For example when you are in a big test it will relieve anxiety. 

Bubble gum helps a lot.


Statement 2: Bubble gum gives you strong teeth. As Long as the gum is sugar free then you are algood. If you chew gum for 20 minutes after you eat it can protect your teeth by removing food debris and increasing your saliva flow. Your saliva strengthens your tooth enamel because it carries phosphate and calcium.


Statement 3: Chewing gum is actually a workout. Did you know that if you chew gum for an hour you can burn 11 calories. So if you're at school you can burn 66 calories in a day. 


Statement 4: Slim your waistline

According to a study by the University of Liverpool, chewing gum can slightly curb your cravings, which may help you make better eating choices. On average, the gum chewers in the study ate 36 fewer calories than those who didn’t chew gum. That doesn’t sound all that impressive, but if you cut 36 calories out of your diet every day, it adds up.

In conclusion chewing gum should be allowed in school. Gum has lots of good benefits. Chewing gum relieves stress and makes your breath smell nice . It strengthens your teeth and it also helps you lose weight. The bubble gum is like 4 in 1 deal




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